Score: 3

"Err,"

submission: relax...

date: January 30, 2008

How 'bout I just skip to the constructive criticism.

I'd go look at a few more basic flash tutorials to learn about "onion skinning" "layering" "music compression" and basic action scripting. Something as simple as ()stopallsounds or whatever can fix the music repeat problem.

I'd use thicker lines, double the framerate, compress the music file so it's not an enormous 6 meg, and create something worthwhile/entertaining to watch! There are tons of great fbf line animations, but if you compare them to this, it's easy to see this isn't one of them.

Keep trying!

Score: 3

"WHOA WHOA WHOA."

submission: Naked Solitaire

date: December 17, 2007

This was solitaire. I was completely misled by the title, and the naked girls didn't even make up for it! Blackjack happens to be my game of choice, followed by poker. Solitaire is LAST on my list.

Also : No Music. The girls were compressed badly (you could see artifacts), and the cards were hard to read. Gameplay felt sterile, like a hospital. With sound effects, and little touches to make the game seem better quality (like bumping up the screen size a few hundred pixels) this could be a really good SOLITAIRE game.

Score: 5

"Eh, Not Bad."

submission: Bowser's Island Ep. 1

date: December 17, 2007

I'd make the text scroll MUCH faster. People can read at an astounding speed, and people that can't have the option of waiting.

I'd compress the music file to reduce your filesize. This flash shouldn't be more that 5 MB, especially when things like "My New Grounds" don't go over 7.5MB. By listening to it, you can hear an obvious quality difference between this file and others.

Generally, speed things up a bit in terms of animation. Wasn't awful.

Score: 10

"WOW!"

submission: Chrono Trigger - Black Omen

date: February 4, 2007

I clicked download before even hearing 15 seconds of this song!

It's just an incredible version of the Black Omen, which is oddly weird because I'm there (for the 4th play through) in my current game!

Great job!

Score: 9

"Just cool!"

submission: [Dud] Zelda-Piano Dark World

date: May 13, 2005

Hey, this was really good playing, but I can't help wonder where you get all these pieces from? I understand the improvisation pieces are most likely ...improvisation...but, also playing the piano at a high level makes me wonder if you just transposed this from your head to the piano! If so that's really good, and I know how hard it is, but otherwise, do you think you could contact me and maybe I could get ahold of the sheet music? Thx, and good job!